DD1HW8 Chapter 14

Revised Memo from Chapter 1 

 University of Arizona 

 To: Emily Thomas
From: Ashley White
Subject: University of Arizona home page
Date: 07 July 2017

The purpose of this memo is to present the appearance of the Arizona home page to others. The goal is to see if the home page meet the three measures of excellence in technical communication: clarity, accessibility, and professional appearance.

Summary: 
 In general, I believe the Arizona home page meets all the requirements to achieve excellence in the technical communication of clarity, accessibility, and professional appearance. I think the layout is organize, appealing, and very effective to anyone on the website. I don't see any issues that would be make the website not meet the excellence.

Discussion: 
According to the measures of excellence in technical communication, the University of Arizona website meets the requirements of clarity, accessibility, and professional appearance. For clarity the page highlights the accomplishments of the school. Being top 100 among the Top 100 in World, Reputation Ranking along with amazing hospital and law school. There goal is to get someone to explore there school and attend the University of Arizona. Based off appearance they are doing a great job by showing pictures of the school and all the relevant activity the university per takes in. For accessibility, its easy to navigate, they have apply, visit, virtual tour, girl and a search button to help people get the answers they want. 

Overall, I believe the home page meet each of these measures of excellence very effectively. The design is clean and easy to navigate around. There not unnecessary links or pages to find the appropriate information or to understand the website. I would send the link to anyone who is curious about the University of Arizona.


Recommendation: 

 I would appreciate to see the amount of money a student would have to pay to attend the college. Maybe even estimate how long it will take to receive a degree.


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I revised my Chapter 1 because I was missing some parts like the title, summary, and recommendation. Organizing the memo was the major changes I need to make not really the context of the memo. Having the titles and headlines help understand the purpose of the memo and also the organization. After reading Chapter 14 I have a better understand of how to write an memo. 

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