DD4HW2

Peer View for Project #1 

 1. Brandon Bosiclair 

  • I think it project #1 was very simple but needs more details for instructions. Maybe picking different features to explore on the application like adding notes, voice overs, how to present, or how to make your edit your presentation. 
  • I would also zoom in on the images for the reader can understand what they are looking for. 
  • https://docs.google.com/document/d/14hx6s_0vdhvdfTzdkDCskfDiLE3f5SIiihoAj3w4kiw/edit

2. Luis Arochi 
  •  The draft of project #1 is on a good start to the final project. The images are great and detail but the instructions need some work on. Unclear and confusing on some of the parts because he tried to cover everything in one part. If he breaks it down it would be more clear and understand. 
  • He should also explain why the readers should Trello and what is Trello about before starting the instructions. 
  • I would I would expand on the List and Card part so the readers can understand the importance of the feature. 
  • https://docs.google.com/document/d/16VOtuO_PBh2b0WsLWWwJ14wNG91GAlbpT0UWrQc3qiU/edit#

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