DD9HW2 Reflect on PR

After doing the Peer Review I realize I have a lot of work to do for my Project #2, but doing this also clear up some confusion I had for Project #2.

What did you learn from reading and replying to your classmates’ drafts? 

  • I need to find articles related to my topic and annotate them. Give a break summary about my topic. I need 3 to 5 of an annotated bibliography.

After reviewing their drafts, what do you realize you need to revise in your own draft? 

  • Better title. 
  • Add some imagery 
  • Explain more on my newsletter. 
  • Find my sources and annotate them. 
  • Fix some sentence structure and flow. 
  • Better introductions to everything. 

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